A summary of the points made:
- Likes how the individual scenes flow
- Picked up on the story
- Really liked the shot of the alcohol being poured into the glass
- Understands the narrative but the idea of his career as a teacher needs to be developed
- Thinks the vignette effect is cinematic
- Liked the camera movements
- Didn't like the final shot of the laptop
- Thinks that the last shot is unstable
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