Thursday, 8 February 2018

Production: Rough edit feedback #2


Main points of feedback:


  • Really well shot
  • Good locations
  • Likes the vignette effect, thinks it looks professional
  • Likes the black borders around the shots 
  • Understood the narrative 
  • Could use more locations to build up narrative 
  • Obvious themes of anger and alcoholism 
  • More variation in shots needed
  • More variation in locations - shots in a school

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